Wednesday, March 27, 2013

I finished part one {if that means anything to you}.

Do y'all think I should post it or keep it until I finish the second Snow White and then post it as a whole? Just tell me. Anyway, I'm giving you another snatchit. Because that's what I do. And this part is fairly interesting.

I hold his hand while he sleeps.
Or maybe he’s dead, I wouldn’t know.
But I think a healer would have noticed by now if he was dead.
They never told me what certainty they have that he will live.
And maybe if he does go limp, and never open his eyes again, I will live through the pain of losing him and ******* *****.
But nothing has been dependable of late. 

The stars are a part that I can't revealve to you yet {it's not swearing, I promise. ;)}, because this is the end of the first part.


  1. Great! You should totally post the whole story. I'm curious about your Snow White story. Is it a re-telling of the fairy tale done by you? =D

    1. Thank you! I still have about two parts to go in the second story {I'm doing it in parts}. Yeah, it is. I have my first Snow White story out {in mostly unedited form} but that's on a different blog.
      ANYWAY, :) it's a trilogy, but in the first and second books I don't think I did a very good job on telling the fairy tale, so in the third book I think is when it's all going to make sense. Probably. But I don't often make sense... ;)

    2. Haha! Cool! I'd love to read it. What is the name of the blog that it's on? I'm working on a story for school- in the editing process right now. And it's like every time I read through there's something I want to add in or change! But I think my finished product will make a lot more sense. There were a couple knots I didn't tie, and then I had to take two people entirely out of the story because they just didn't mean anything. I've still got a ways to go. Keep it up!

    3. It's actually a private blog. I'd love to invite you, but I'd need your email. {If you want to, you can email me at}
      I hate editing, but sometimes it makes a brilliant but wacko story finally work out. Thank you, and you, too!


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