Prologue:
He watched wearily as the pretty black haired and blue-eyed
girl moved gracefully into the trees. He watched also as a taller, also black
haired older woman followed the girl. He sighed as he watched them, as if he
was about to do a rather annoying and useless task.
‘’Here goes nothing,’’ He muttered to himself as he plunged
into the Forest, his hand resting on his sword hilt.
It was eerily quiet. The woman made no sound as she stepped
on brown, fallen leaves; but that wasn’t odd. What was odd that the girl, born
and raised in the castle, made no sound as she walked.
She hasn’t been taught how to mask
the sounds of her steps. How does she do that? His tired mind pondered.
As he thought the woman had stopped and he had not noticed.
He continued on, bumping into her.
‘’Theo! Why are you here?’’ The woman hissed, holding Theo
away from her.
‘’The same reason you’re here,’’ he answered solemnly. The
woman looked into his eyes. She was good, very good at telling the truth in
your eyes.
She finally broke away from his gaze and blinked. ‘’Come
then,’’ she said.
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Awesome! Is this like the prologue? Its really good.
ReplyDeleteThank you! I don't normally write in this tense but I find when I do I enjoy it tons. I'll have to write a novel in this tense! :)
DeleteAnd yes, I forgot to mention it is. Oh no, I spelled it wrong accidentally! Haha.
DeleteI read the title of the blog and was wondering, is this a real club? Or just a title? If it is a real club, how could you join?
ReplyDeleteThank you!
-Lee
Hello, Lee!
DeleteIt's called a club, though we have limits on authors. At this time, we are not taking any other authors, and even if we were, there are other people in line.
Have a great day! :)
~Storyteller
Like it a ton!!! =D
ReplyDeleteThank you! I feel so protective over it now, like it's my baby. Haha.
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